some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes.others believe that that is important for children to make decisions about matters that effect them. discuss both view and give your opinion

There has been always arguments whether children have become more selfish
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if they made their own decision
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their daily issues, while others believe that
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idea would make them more careful about the probable effects which every choice would have.
To begin
with, giving the freedom of choice to children has some positive points.
children
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Children
who are more free to make their decisions about day-to-day matters
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such
as, the freedom of choice in clothing
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entertainments
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or eating habits
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will give them the chance to enjoy their life at the right moment of their age
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though
this
ability would make them to learn from their choices
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even if it was a wrong one.With
this
aspect they would build up their personality in early ages and they could have taken the lesson from the selected choices
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which generally affected in a particular way
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by
them.
As a result
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they would become
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-mature in early-age that could help them to avoid making mistakes in
future
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the future
. Those who are opponents on
this
view, claim that the given opportunity to children at early age,when they are not mature enough ,to distinguish between positive and negative aspects of their choices, are likely to turn them to a self-centered child in future,which means that they would become selfish and probably would not care about others.As they
accssessed
have an existence, be extant
exist
to any things that they chose
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they might would like to
axcpect
regard something as probable or likely
expect
to
recieve
get something; come into possession of
receive
anything that they desire.
Thus
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this
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
would
defenaitly
without question and beyond doubt
definitely
harm them and others in society. To summa
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ize,in my opinion children should have
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