Due to the development and rapid expansion of supermarket in some countries, many small, local business are unable to compete. Some people think that the closure of local business will bring about the death of local communities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, there is a rapid expansion of
supermarket
in some countries. Many people believed that due to the strong competition, local business would be closed that will impact negatively and might destroy the local communities. In my opinion, I totally agree with
this
view for two reasons below.
Firstly
, small businesses serves an important function in keeping the economy of local communities. In fact, many factories rely on local communities to sell their products.
Thus
, without small businesses, a large number of factories will be threatened to be closed.
As a result
, numerous workers might lose their jobs and become the social burden.
In addition
, roughly 80% percent of people tends to buy necessary goods
such
as foods and vegetables from local market rather than from
supermarket
because they found them cheaper and fresher than that of
supermarket
Suggestion
a supermarket
. If these local businesses are closed, the living standard would be very expensive and local resident cannot afford it. In Vietnam,
for example
, vegetables and fruits sold in supermarkets are often long-standing and have poor quality.
Moreover
, they are 1.5 times more expensive than buying in
markets
Suggestion
the markets
. So people are more likely buy in local markets.
Secondly
, the absence of local businesses will make the life complicated for people who live in countryside areas. Obviously, big supermarkets are often placed in large centres where there are crowded with people.
Therefore
, when people in remote rural areas want to buy necessary things in simple life like foods, household appliances..., they have to waste time and money to buy those things in
supermarket
Suggestion
the supermarket
. It causes inconvenience and affects their lives. In conclusion,
although
the development of supermarkets is essential for modern life, local businesses still play an important role for the local people and without it, there will be many detrimental effects on the local communities.
Submitted by Quỳnh Châm Trịnh on

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