Some people say that modern life has affected family life? Do you agree or disagree. Give reasons and examples to justify.

Due to globalisation, people’s lifestyle is getting change quickly in the fast growing world. It’s always in debate that new opportunities in every sector lead a
person
to modify their
life
according to their requirements. Some people opine that it had a major impact on a personal
life
and I
also
agree with
this
viewpoint.
To begin
with, a
person
having vast amount of growing opportunities in the developing and developed countries and
this
leads them to a race of fast
pace
Suggestion
paced
competition and stress causing in their respective core field.
Thus
, a
person
always focused more on career development and hunting to learn new skills in their job
life
which results them to less concentrate on the family. According to the research conducted, young parents who are successful in their professional careers in their late 30’s could not able to give more quality
time
to their loved one’s. For an instance, a successful business tycoon couple doesn’t have that much period of
time
in routine
life
to look out their parents and children.
Moreover
, due to
such
circumstances, busy professional always think that they can hire maids, and caretakers who can take care of the whole family.
In addition
to it, even they opine that personal level of classes should be imposed on children for academic education so that they could absorb a certain amount of quality education rather than parents teaching their kids at a
person
Suggestion
personal
level.
However
, relations could get spoiled and leads it to bigger conflicts between family members because of the low contribution of good
time
spent by house leader. Even the care which is taken at personal level creates feelings, love, and emotions between the family members and brings more close attachment. To summarize, we all know that modern and professional lifestyle has many implications and leads them to more pressure and stress causing
life
which forgets them to spend a quality
time
with their loved ones.
Submitted by Nikita & Kash  on

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