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Write a letter to invite friend for the birthday celebration

#friend #birthday #celebration
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Dear Raha, I hope
this
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 letter finds you in great spirits. I am writing to share
an
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the
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 exciting news that I
planned
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plan
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 to celebrate my 21st birthday at “Taj Motel” in Toronto
on
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apply
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the next weekend from 11am to 11pm. I cannot imagine celebrating it without you. The purpose of
this
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 letter is to share some event highlights as follows: •Theme is to express culture so
vintage
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a vintage
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 outfit would be preferred. •Dance party in the evening. •Cake cutting at around 5 pm. •Fun-filled games between girls and boys teams. Winners will receive a special reward for their outstanding performances. If you have any impressive
idea
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of
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for
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 planning for decorations, cuisine, or theme, please share
with
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them with
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 me promptly so I can accommodate
accordingly
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 to the arrangements to ensure we exceed the celebration for more enjoyment.Looking forward
for
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to
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 catching up with you and making some unforgettable memories together. Take care and see you soon! Warm regards, Sarab
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Coherence and Cohesion
Ensure clarity by avoiding merging many ideas into one paragraph.
Coherence and Cohesion
Consider separating details into distinct paragraphs for enhanced clarity.
Task Response
Letter provides all essential event details clearly and concisely.
Task Response
Warm and personal tone is very inviting and appropriate for the occasion.
Coherence and Cohesion
Includes event details and invites suggestions, creating an engaging invitation.

Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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