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Some people think that spending a lot on holding wedding parties, birthday parties and other celebration is just a waste of money .Others ,however, think that these are necessary for individuals and the society .Discuss.

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In
this
 contemporary
world there
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world, there
 are copious extravagant people who can splurge easily in anything without thinking once.A few people believe that we should not use plenty of
money
 in various functions
,
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,
as it is
unnecessary expenditure
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an unnecessary expenditure
,
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,
while others say that in order to community and individual these celebrations are required. On one hand, people ought not to spend too much
money
 for parties because these are redundant.People feel temporary happiness from it because after the party all gewgaw decorations would be useless.
On the contrary
,
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,
 if a person utilize that
money
 for the amelioration of the society
,
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it will provide benefits to less fortunate people.
Hence
,
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,
it's
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
 fruitful consequences would be long lasting since it give
sense
Suggestion
a sense
 of satisfaction by helping needy hands.
Instead
 of allocating
high amount
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a high amount
 of
money
 in celebrations
,
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,
people must
do
engage in
make
 savings of it for the betterment of the future and for
next generation
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the next generation
.
On the other hand
, these luxurious parties are essential to affluent people for their reputation in society.
For example
,
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,
mukesh
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Mukesh
ambani
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Ambani
 arranged big-budget wedding
forr
appropriate to; intended for
for
 her daughter.Politicians who always want to be in a lime light and on page 3
,
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,
they organize grand parties owing to their own boon and to put major impact on
public
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the public
.Usually, opulent functions significant for wealthy people rather than others. In conclusion
,
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,
instead
 of spending huge amount of
money
in
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on
 parties
,
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,
people should use it for charity or save it for the future.Even though for some people
,
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big parties are a notable part of their life.
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