Some people think that spending a lot on holding wedding parties, birthday parties and other celebration is just a waste of money .Others ,however, think that these are necessary for individuals and the society .Discuss.

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contemporary

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are copious extravagant people who can splurge easily in anything without thinking once.A few people believe that we should not use plenty of

money

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in various functions

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as it is

unnecessary expenditure

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an unnecessary expenditure

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while others say that in order to community and individual these celebrations are required. On one hand, people ought not to spend too much

money

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for parties because these are redundant.People feel temporary happiness from it because after the party all gewgaw decorations would be useless.

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if a person utilize that

money

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for the amelioration of the society

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it will provide benefits to less fortunate people.

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of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"

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fruitful consequences would be long lasting since it give

sense

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a sense

of satisfaction by helping needy hands.

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of allocating

high amount

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a high amount

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money

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in celebrations

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people must

do

engage in

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savings of it for the betterment of the future and for

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next generation

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the next generation

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, these luxurious parties are essential to affluent people for their reputation in society.

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Mukesh

ambani

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Ambani

arranged big-budget wedding

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appropriate to; intended for

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her daughter.Politicians who always want to be in a lime light and on page 3

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they organize grand parties owing to their own boon and to put major impact on

public

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the public

.Usually, opulent functions significant for wealthy people rather than others. In conclusion

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instead

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of spending huge amount of

money

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in

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on

parties

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people should use it for charity or save it for the future.Even though for some people

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big parties are a notable part of their life.