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Home schooling belongs to the past and is unacceptable in modern society. To what extent do do you agree or disagree with this statement? Use your own knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.

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Everything has a two sides and
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 schooling is not an exception. In the past it seemed like the most natural way of educating children, but today many people criticize it. We must acknowledge that parents know their children best. That gives them a good chance of knowing how to make their
child
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 understand certain concepts. Using their
child
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’s interests, parents can make the process of learning more enjoyable and effective.
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, being ay
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 makes a
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 feel safe, which contributes to his ability to concentrate on studying.
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, many people believe that teaching should be done by professionals. There are many proven scientific approaches that produces good results and without those techniques, parents who teach their kids at
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 have no chance of success. Associative learning is a good example of
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 a technique. Showing the
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 images while learning the alphabet (apple for “a”, boy for “b”) makes him or her remember the letter faster and easier.
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, not every parent is capable of teaching his or her
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 at
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 because the blind cannot lead the blind. Parents cannot teach children something they don’t know themselves, and let’s face it- not all of us have a profound knowledge of history or
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geography, even
 on a school textbook level. Eventually, even those mums and dads who succeed at school could forget material with the passage of time. In conclusion, I have more trust in the abilities and experience of professional teachers than I do in my own.
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    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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