Eating a balanced diet is the most important factor for a healthy life. To what extent do you agree?

The healthy
food
can be eaten by
great amount
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a great amount
of people for having good health and excellent
body
. In my opinion, I agree that people must consume more a balanced
food
during all life.
First
of all, people who like to
eating
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eat
vegetables and fruits and fish do not have
problem
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a problem
problems
with their health.
This
means that the people have good pleasure and heart rate
that is
why they can do sports,
such
as tennis, box and others.
For example
, Russian people who eat balanced
food
can participate in different
sport
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sporting
events. Without good pleasure and a heart, many people cannot get a new experience in sport.
As a result
, balanced
food
can helped
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can help
achieving
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achieve
a new result in
sports
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a sports
or special activities.
On the other hand
, consuming healthy
food
is helped to have
slim
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a slim body
body
and
clearly
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clearer
clear
skin
by people.
In other words
, balanced foods contained good vitamins and minerals that are why
body
or
skin
start to improve than it is in the past.
For instance
, the people who eat healthy
food
cannot
used
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use
special cream for their face and cannot do sport in their life. Without good
skin
and slim
body
, many people cannot like looking for ourselves.
Thus
, balanced foods help to improve
body
and
skin
of many people. In conclusion, I think that people who consume balanced
food
have more advantages
such
as excellent health and perfect
body
, skins.
Submitted by Julia on

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