Write a letter to the Planning Manager of your local council about a historical building in your area that is about to be pulled down due to the lack of money to repair it. In your letter: State why the building is important What the building can be used for in the future Suggest ways for paying for the repairs

Dear Sir, I am writing
this
letter to bring your attention
towards
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the destruction of the historical monument in my area and
that is
about to damage and it requires to renovate as soon as possible.
In addition
, our area is renowned due to
this
beautiful building
since
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50 years,
Moreover
, the design of walls, doors, windows are handmade which look adorable and
eye catching
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. Along with
this
, it was a famous tourist place for people;
however
, today the building is not like that as it needs to be repaired.
Moreover
,
this
would be precious for
next
generations
also
to keep in touch with historical facts and the beauty of
this
building definitely attract more foreigners by which various masses get their employment as well.
Furthermore
, I want to recommend you to utilize the government fund for
this
social deed,
otherwise
, the citizens of my area agree to contribute to the renovation of our symbol of heritage. Waiting for your prompt service. Yours sincerely, Bhawna Arya
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

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  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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