You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter, • describe the situation • explain your problems and why it is difficult to work • say what kind of accommodation you would prefer Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Sir or Madam,
I would like to express my dissatisfaction
towards
my roommate because of her being impolite. I want you to move me in the other range on my incoming term.
I am a busy person because I am a working student. I got really exhausted after my shift. Unfortunately, when I arrived at our space, she is taking her friends with her, talking aloud while drinking alcohol. I cannot take my rest the way I wanted, and I constantly being irritated at all times. Eventually, she borrowed my dress a week ago, and she did not return it to me. I am having an exam for Change preposition
with
the
Correct article usage
apply
next
the coming week, and need to review seriously. That's why I am asking you to another place.
I would appreciate it if you can grant my plea. Thank you in advance.
Yours faithfully,
MajaSubmitted by Maja M. Del Rosario on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite