A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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From the ancient times, animals are used by humans for various purposes, like satisfying their hunger, clothes, shelter and many more things.
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, many people have an opinion that, wild things should not be used as a substitute for human satisfaction, while others have an opinion that, they should be exploited for experiment and
research
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purposes.
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with, animals are
also
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living beings in the end, and they should not be killed or trapped by the humans for their personal gratification.
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, these animals is part of our environment and they should be treated equally as the humans as they have
life
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, family of their own.
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, many animals are kept in the zoo for the entertainment of the people as they find them fascinating, but if we think from the prospective of the animals they would not be happy as their freedom is not available to them.
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, they are experimenting for many
research
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to fulfil human desires. These are an act of cruelty and should not be done.
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, animals must be treated equally as the humans and should not be used by the people.
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, these beings are used by the persons for many reasons,
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, many individuals use these animals for their food, as they have no other options to eat, especially in harsh climatic conditions of the Alaska, Siberia and many more.
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, these living beings, almost resembles to the humans in many ways, so they are the best option to do any
research
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as human
life
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will always be optimum as compared to the animals as the people have, the ability to think and animals does not.
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, for the space mission conducted by Russia, the sputnik-1, in that a monkey was used as it has the same characteristic as that of the humans.
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, animals are used for many things as they provide answers to our
research
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. In my opinion, animals should be exploited to an extend, where it must be necessary as we cannot give
life
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of a human as it is a crime and with the experiment on the animals, many human
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life
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lives
can be saved. To Conclude, it is true that animals should not be exploited in the human use, but it is always better to risk a
life
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of an animal rather than risking the
life
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of a human.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Exploitation
  • Animal welfare
  • Ethical treatment
  • Vegetarianism
  • Veganism
  • Cognitive dissonance
  • Humane
  • Live stock
  • Cruelty-free
  • Bioethics
  • Conservation
  • Habitat preservation
  • Ecosystem
  • Biodiversity
  • Animal testing
  • Synthetic biology
  • Genetic engineering
  • Speciesism
  • Animal husbandry
  • Sustainable farming
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