Some people consider that school education should be concentrated on academic subjects, which would be helpful for their future careers, and subjects like music and sport are not useful. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

These days, career orientation for young generations through academic disciplines or

music

and physical education has been receiving a great deal of public attention.

Although

academic subjects should be focused on as these disciplines are helpful for one’s occupation in the future, I believe that

music

and sports

also

play an equal role and should be included in the curriculum.

To begin

with, there is a range of explanations for why schools should focus on core subjects.

Firstly

, if academic disciplines are prioritized, students can stand a chance of owning problem-solving skills.

For example

, by addressing formulas, the young generation can excel in thinking logically and having better reasoning abilities, which are required in many professions.

Secondly

, the more languages children cultivate, the more job opportunities are created. Taking multinational corporations as a prominent example, these international recruiters tend to accept applicants who are bilingual or multilingual; thereby, through acquiring foreign languages at schools, the young can secure a financially viable career after graduating.

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On the other hand

, I strongly believe that non-academic subjects should be included in

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an announcement of the events that will occur as part of a theatrical or sporting event

programme

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for two compelling reasons.

Firstly

, since instructing students to play sports can help them develop the ability to use tactics and novel ideas, schools should integrate

this

activity into the curriculum. In fact, when they are performing, they may think about what they do,

analyze

consider in detail and subject to an analysis in order to discover essential features or meaning

analyse

the situation, and make decisions; thereby, when it comes to working in a company, they can draw strategies that enable them to boost the productivity and growth of

this

company and seize the chance of climbing the corporate ladder as well.

Moreover

, since sports or

music

are becoming

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billion-dollar industries, students who are endowed with talents for these subjects should be given chances to develop their field. In fact, many young talents in athletic and artistic majors are discovered at school, conditioning them to have a successful career. In conclusion, I am of the opinion that disciplines

such

as

music

and sports should be given priority in school

besides

academic subjects.