Many old buildings protected by law are part of the nation’s history. Some people think that they be knocked down and replaced by news ones. How important is it to maintain old buildings? Should history stand in the way of progress?

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At present, there have been many lawfully preserved historical sites and ancient buildings standing in the middle of modern urbanization, and
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this
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has become a controversial issue about maintaining or eliminating the nation’s history. In
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essay, I shall discuss the necessity of protecting the old premises, and give the reasons why these should be kept despite the progression of the cities. With magnificent architectural designs and historical backgrounds, the ancient sites are historically and economically important to
human
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humanity
. Nowadays, the historical places have preserved imperative pieces of data and stories, which can be employed to comprehend the ancient civilization.
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, some obsolete places, which are protected by law, are the
centers
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centres
where villagers can make monetary gains from selling souvenirs.
For example
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, the remains of the palaces in Thailand are deeply studied by the historians and
archeologists
an anthropologist who studies prehistoric people and their culture
archaeologists
archaeologists'
archaeologist's
, hoping that they can track and augment Thai history. Around the sites, there are a variety of vendors and local shops available for tourists.
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some citizens ignore
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importance
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important
and focus on the improvement of urban structures, I do think that history isn’t blocking the national advancement. Even though the emergence of new premises and
accomodations
making or becoming suitable; adjusting to circumstances
accommodation
need larger areas to develop, the destruction of old buildings doesn’t only provide
inadequate amount
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inadequate amounts
of land, but it
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also abolish
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also abolishes
has also abolished
the symbols of the area. The Chinese temple,
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, was situated in the municipal of my hometown, and served lots of prayers and visitors world-wide. There was a policy to destroy it and replaced with the new modern market. After the development, the area was too small to include all the vendors and was eventually
adandoned
forsaken by owner or inhabitants
abandoned
. From
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, people lost their prominent attraction and places for making money. In conclusion, the ancient sites should be maintained in the way of the growing cities.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Cultural heritage
  • Tangible connections
  • Insight
  • Historic buildings
  • Architectural significance
  • Environmental impact
  • Resource consumption
  • Community identity
  • Character
  • Distinct
  • Preservation
  • Revenue
  • Tourists
  • Demolishing
  • Constructing
  • Replicated
  • Unique styles
  • Local businesses
  • Significant revenue
  • Historical value
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