Throughout history, male leaders always lead us to violence and conflict. If a society is governed by female leaders, it will be more peaceful. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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Most of the countries in the world are led by men, only a few countries are governed by women. I personally think that whether a
government
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or a
leadership
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brings
violence
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or peace has nothing to do with the
gender
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of the
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. It is generally believed that women have gentler personality than men in the way they act. But, it does not guarantee that if a woman leads a
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or a society, they can prevent conflicts, clash or
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from happening because a
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is not the only party causing or triggering conflicts. In running her
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and taking a decision or a policy, a female
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cooperates with and discusses a lot with many other parties so I do not think that her mother figure will come
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in dealing with various complicated problems her
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is facing.
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, she cannot give priority to her feminine feeling (caring, loving, affecting, etc.) In policy making. A
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, either female or male, needs to take action in accordance with the situation.
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why I believe that the
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of a
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makes no difference in
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issue. Many countries like Bangladesh, India, and Pakistan were governed by female leaders and yet the conflict and
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increased during their time and
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is a clear indication that a female
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cannot guarantee and peaceful society.
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, conflicts often happen because of inability or bad
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skill of a
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in running his or her
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. In any
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, the incapability of leaders, regardless of their
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, causes many problems leading to the unsatisfactory of people and the decrease in people’s trust level of the
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, both of which are likely to result in chaos, clash, and conflict. I am convinced that everyone will agree that capability and
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skill have nothing to do with
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. It is ridiculous to judge that men have a better capability in leading an organisation than women, or vice versa.
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, the success and the failure of an organisation or a
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are determined not only by the
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but
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the staffs and the cabinet. No matter how capable the
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is, he or she will not be able to execute his or her
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programs to bring prosperity to his or her people and to satisfy them if he or she does not have a good team. In conclusion, the ability of a
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to avoid and prevent conflict and
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depends on the capability of the
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, regardless of
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, to run the
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. It is not wise to say that men with their masculinity bring
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and none can guarantee that women with their femininity will be able to bring peace for the people.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • gender dynamics
  • militaristic policies
  • expansionist
  • diplomatic governance
  • risk-taking
  • societal norms
  • inclusive approach
  • collaborative governance
  • gender stereotypes
  • individual qualities
  • comprehensive approach
  • conflict resolution
  • aggression
  • historical context
  • colonial expansion
  • contemporary
  • male dominance
  • innate differences
  • peaceful governance
  • competitive strategies
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