In some areas of the United States, a curfew is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult . What is your opinion about this?

In the United States of America, some of the states have laws that prohibit adolescents from being outside their homes without the supervision of elderly family members at certain times of the day. From my own point of view, the very fact that
such
laws still exist and are still being issued in some parts of the world, is in itself an
outrageous
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outrage
preach against freedom and an unintelligent announcement of total ignorance of
teen age
being of the age 13 through 19
teenage
. Barriers and boundaries are very difficult concepts for teenagers to understand, let alone accept and abide by. Adolescents
would never obey orders forced
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would never obey orders force
would never obey orders forced
upon them unless they feel a kind of ownership of them.
For example
, teenagers would feel humiliated and belittled if they were forced to go out at certain times with adults to keep watch over them. For them,
this
would only mean they are not trustworthy or are still children. When I was in middle school, it was impossible for me to let my mother accompany me to the grocery stores.
This
was an attack on
my
objective form of "I"
me
,
then
presumed, manhood. Curfews of
this
nature are nothing but a governmental announcement of helplessness and inefficiency. By
such
a law, the security establishments are admitting their inability to control and secure the community or the individual. A teenage taking a walk around his home,
for instance
, should not be a threat posed
at
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by
others, nor should others be to him provided that police forces are sufficiently and efficiently diploid. As a teenager, I used to hang out with my friends all through the night. That was in a 3rd world country about 25 years ago. Shouldn't
this
be the case in the now “mighty” USA? To sum up, total and undivided freedom can never come into conflict with being a teenager. Whether I am a child, a teenager, an adult or an elderly, my freedom should always be protected; the state should see to it.
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