You rent a four-bedroom house, which you share with two other students. However, there are several problems with this house that needs fixing. You also find it expensive and would like to find another student to share the spare bedroom. Write a letter to the estate agency. In the letter: - explain your situation - describe the problems with the house - say what you would like to happen

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

this

letter to inform you about the inconvenience we are facing these days in

this

house.

This

is a

four bedroom

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house shared by three people including me, and it needs many renovations.

Firstly

, the outer sunbath area has a shattered glass window which is always leaking during

rainy

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the rainy

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season, needs to be repaired urgently.

Secondly

, the balcony's door lock is jammed since we rented out

this

house. Please keep it in a list of replacements.

Thirdly

, the washing area's drain is somewhere leaking to the ground floor's cabinet. The leakage not only makes the cupboard moist

,

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but

also

, produce a

fowl

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foul

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smell in the closet. A good water sealant is required to be applied at

earliest

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the earliest

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.

Moreover

, we are looking forward

for

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to

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someone of our age

to share

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sharing

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this

apartment with us as a paying guest. As the rental payment according to the rental lease agreement will be increased to ten

percent

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per cent

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annually, so it will definitely go beyond our affordability.

Therefore

, your help would be much appreciated in searching

of

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new

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a new

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flatmate and getting all the repairs done, as soon as possible. Thanking in anticipation. Yours sincerely, Mahrukh Fatima