You rent a four-bedroom house, which you share with two other students. However, there are several problems with this house that needs fixing. You also find it expensive and would like to find another student to share the spare bedroom. Write a letter to the estate agency. In the letter: - explain your situation - describe the problems with the house - say what you would like to happen

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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letter to inform you about the inconvenience we are facing these days in

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house.

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is a

four bedroom

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house shared by three people including me, and it needs many renovations.

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, the outer sunbath area has a shattered glass window which is always leaking during

rainy

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season, needs to be repaired urgently.

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, the balcony's door lock is jammed since we rented out

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house. Please keep it in a list of replacements.

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, the washing area's drain is somewhere leaking to the ground floor's cabinet. The leakage not only makes the cupboard moist

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but

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, produce a

fowl

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smell in the closet. A good water sealant is required to be applied at

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, we are looking forward

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someone of our age

to share

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apartment with us as a paying guest. As the rental payment according to the rental lease agreement will be increased to ten

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annually, so it will definitely go beyond our affordability.

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, your help would be much appreciated in searching

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new

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flatmate and getting all the repairs done, as soon as possible. Thanking in anticipation. Yours sincerely, Mahrukh Fatima

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Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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198 words

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