You want to study in another country in some university. You need an accommodation to stay. Your friend is studying in the same university. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Give details about your study plans What type of accommodation are you looking for Suggest how your friend can search a place for you. Write at least 150 words. You do not need to write any addresses.

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Dear Raman, I hope you’re doing well. I am writing

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letter to let you know that I’ve got an approval letter for a student visa from Canada yesterday in your Lambton college. Currently, I’m looking for an apartment to live in.

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, I have completed my Commerce in high school. I've planned to study a

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diploma course in international business (BINM).

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, my classes are going to start in the following month (I.e. August 25, 2020). A week before, there will be an orientation that has to be attended.

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, I was trying to look for an apartment or the basement with a single bedroom including

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and bathroom.Usually, I’ve never shared my room with a stranger.

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, I was unable to find

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accommodation till now. My neighbours came back from Canada

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year.

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, they found an apartment for them by using advertisements posted outside of the grocery stores and online sites. I was wondering if you could try the same way. Looking forward to hearing from you soon. Thank you in advance.

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sincerely, Rahul Sharma

Submitted by rahul Sharma on Mon Jul 20 2020

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