You want to study in another country in some university. You need an accommodation to stay. Your friend is studying in the same university. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Give details about your study plans What type of accommodation are you looking for Suggest how your friend can search a place for you. Write at least 150 words. You do not need to write any addresses.

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Dear Raman, I hope you’re doing well.

I'am

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writing a letter to inform you that I’ve got an approval letter for a student visa from Canada yesterday

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your Lambton university. Currently, I’m looking for

residence

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to live in Canada.

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with, I've planned to study a

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diploma course in international business (BINM).

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, my classes are going to start in the following month (I.e. August 25, 2020).

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, I am trying to look for a flat or the basement, which is great for

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stay, that has features like WiFi access, washing and a single bedroom including kitchen and bathroom. It is quite difficult to find

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suitable accommodation, that's why, I want you to do me a favour by searching

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place where I could study comfortably without any disturbance and

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should be near the college and full of basic amenities like proper lighting, water supply and so on. As I’ve never shared my room with a stranger. My neighbours came back from Canada. They had found accommodation for them by using advertisements posted outside of the grocery stores and

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online sites.

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, I was wondering if you could try to search

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apartment for me while pursuing your own study and work. Looking forward to hearing from you soon.

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Sincerely, Rahul Sharma 188 words

rahul SharmaMon Jul 20 2020

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

9 paragraphs

226 words

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