When new towns are planned it is more important to build public parks or sports facilities than shopping centers for people to spend their free time To what extent do you agree or disagree

Over a period of time, green lashes are said to be the required element which needed to be present at the places where there are

dewellers

someone who purchases and maintains an inventory of goods to be sold

dealers

jewellers

dwellers

. But with

increase

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the increase

an increase

increases

in

population shopping

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population, shopping

centers

an area that is approximately central within some larger region

centres

are

been

the state or fact of existing

being

to be considered the

priorty

status established in order of importance or urgency

priority

property

priorities

to be

build

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built

in any new town or city.

This

development has a great impact on the people living

near by

close at hand

nearby

either positively or negatively. On the one side

,

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,

as we know

woth

what thing

what

with

increase in

population many

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population, many

individuals from small

twons

an urban area with a fixed boundary that is smaller than a city

towns

and cities shifts to rural areas

for

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of

the

faclilities

a building or place that provides a particular service or is used for a particular industry

facilities

which are

been

the state or fact of existing

being

provided over here.

As a result

shopping malls

also plays

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also play

the same importance in any town or city.

Moreover

, these malls

has given

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have given

every individual a

libralisation

the act of making less strict

liberalisation

to get the products or services on

conveinent

suited to your comfort or purpose or needs

convenient

baises

use as a basis for; found on

bases

basis

buses

.

Further more

in addition

Furthermore

,

this

enhanced the rate of employment among people living in that area.

On the other hand

, public parks or sports

centers

an area that is approximately central within some larger region

centre

also

ahs

to the same degree (often followed by 'as')

as

there

of them or themselves

their

they're

positive side to it. As these parks

is

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are

a good source of bringing up healthy

realtionships

a relation between people; ('relationship' is often used where 'relation' would serve, as in 'the relationship between inflation and unemployment', but the preferred usage of 'relationship' is for human relations or states of relatedness)

relationships

relationship

among the neighbourhood of the town one lives in.

Therefore

, parks not just only keeps to

fit but

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fit, but

also

allows everyone to introduce one with the motive of harmonious living style which is been missing these days.

Moreover

, parks can be the source to provide you be the only

connectivity

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connection

between the nature around us. To conclude, towns have been

brurgeoning

grow and flourish

burgeoning

bragging

up with new schemes and new way of planning of these

sort

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sorts

of cities

have widely spread

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has widely spread

over all the countries with the introduction of shopping malls

near by

close at hand

nearby

. To my view point

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

believe that these changes are

good but

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good, but

still the advantages

does

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do

outweighs

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outweigh

the disadvantages

for

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of

the same.