Some people believe that all wild animals should be protected. Others say that few wild animals should be protected instead. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Wild
animals
are Use synonyms
the
essential part of our ecosystem. Correct article usage
an
Due to
human population increases, the forest area rapidly decreasing, which adversely affects Linking Words
the
wildlife conservation. Most Correct article usage
apply
people
stated that we should protect all the wild Use synonyms
animals
, Use synonyms
while
another argued that we should emphasize Linking Words
on
saving some wild Change preposition
apply
animals
. There is a widespread worry and Use synonyms
this
will Linking Words
leads
to a myriad of concerns which I will explain in Change the verb form
lead
this
essay.
Many Linking Words
people
feel strongly that Use synonyms
by
saving all the wild beast species leads to Change preposition
apply
the
overpopulation, which could be dangerous for human survival. The reason for Correct article usage
apply
this
is that most Linking Words
of
forest Change preposition
apply
animals
hunt for flesh Use synonyms
preys
and they can easily Fix the agreement mistake
prey
attacks
Correct subject-verb agreement
attack
on
Change preposition
apply
the
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apply
people
. Use synonyms
Therefore
, it is very difficult for human beings to go outside and commute freely. Linking Words
For example
, Linking Words
the
Lions and Tigers are murderous and carnivorous Correct article usage
apply
animals
, if they increase in number, Use synonyms
and
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apply
then
there is a chance of human extinction. Linking Words
Secondly
, conserving wild Linking Words
animals
Use synonyms
required
huge funds which are not afforded by the government because in most Wrong verb form
requires
part
of the world Fix the agreement mistake
parts
people
still suffering from Use synonyms
the
deadly diseases and starvation. So, the money is allocated for the humanity services.
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apply
On the other hand
, others feel just as convinced that Linking Words
by
saving the selective Change preposition
apply
animals
has Use synonyms
profound
impact on Add an article
a profound
the
society because they are quite beneficial for Correct article usage
apply
the
human beings. Correct article usage
apply
For instance
, a dog Linking Words
considered
Add a missing verb
is considered
man’s
best friend Correct article usage
a man’s
whose
is faithful towards their owner. Correct pronoun usage
who
This
species is not harming Linking Words
the
humanity Correct article usage
apply
instead
they helped them. Linking Words
Moreover
, some Linking Words
animals
could be used for medical treatments, in most of the medicines Use synonyms
the
snake venom is used which helps to cure Correct article usage
apply
the
diseases Correct article usage
apply
such
as heart Linking Words
attack
or neurological disorders. Fix the agreement mistake
attacks
However
, if some wild Linking Words
Use synonyms
animals
extinct, it could unbalance the ecosystem.
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animals are
animals were
To conclude
, Linking Words
the
wild Correct article usage
apply
animals
Use synonyms
needed
to be protected in order to maintain the ecosystem balance, but most of the species Wrong verb form
need
threat
Replace the word
threaten
the
Correct article usage
apply
peoples’
lives. We have to protect those Change noun form
people’s
animals
Use synonyms
are
on the verge of extinction.Correct pronoun usage
that are
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