Some people believe that all wild animals should be protected. Others say that few wild animals should be protected instead. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Wild

animals

are

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essential part of our ecosystem.

Due to

human population increases, the forest area rapidly decreasing, which adversely affects

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wildlife conservation. Most

people

stated that we should protect all the wild

animals

,

while

another argued that we should emphasize

on

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saving some wild

animals

. There is a widespread worry and

this

will

leads

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to a myriad of concerns which I will explain in

this

essay. Many

people

feel strongly that

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saving all the wild beast species leads to

the

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overpopulation, which could be dangerous for human survival. The reason for

this

is that most

of

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forest

animals

hunt for flesh

preys

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and they can easily

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on

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the

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people

.

Therefore

, it is very difficult for human beings to go outside and commute freely.

For example

,

the

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Lions and Tigers are murderous and carnivorous

animals

, if they increase in number,

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then

there is a chance of human extinction.

Secondly

, conserving wild

animals

required

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huge funds which are not afforded by the government because in most

part

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parts

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of the world

people

still suffering from

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deadly diseases and starvation. So, the money is allocated for the humanity services.

On the other hand

, others feel just as convinced that

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saving the selective

animals

has

profound

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impact on

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society because they are quite beneficial for

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human beings.

For instance

, a dog

considered

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man’s

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a man’s

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best friend

whose

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is faithful towards their owner.

This

species is not harming

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humanity

instead

they helped them.

Moreover

, some

animals

could be used for medical treatments, in most of the medicines

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snake venom is used which helps to cure

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diseases

such

as heart

attack

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attacks

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or neurological disorders.

However

, if some wild

animals

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animals are

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extinct, it could unbalance the ecosystem.

To conclude

,

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wild

animals

needed

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to be protected in order to maintain the ecosystem balance, but most of the species

threat

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threaten

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peoples’

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lives. We have to protect those

animals

are

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that are

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on the verge of extinction.