The costs of international travel are decreasing and tourism is growing. What are the advantages and disadvantages of increasing tourism activity in different countries?

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With the decrease in costs of travel, there is an increase in the tourism in different countries.
As a result
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, there are advantages and disadvantages, both of which are being discussed in the following essay. Reduction of costs
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hasn't just benefited
hasn't just benefitted
the Airlines with huge profits. Other industries like hotels, restaurants, tourist companies, etc., were
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benefited.
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, it brings foreign exchange currency into the nation, develops stock markets, and inflates the value of home currency in the international market.
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, a person came from America to visit TajMahal and stayed at a hotel there, not only that, he
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hired a vehicle and tour guide, to show him around the place and had visited the nearby restaurants for meals.
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, tourism increased the income for different sectors of the economy and enhances the development.
On the other hand
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, one of the major drawbacks of increased travelling is
pollution
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. With
increase
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the increase
an increase
of transportation and population, they eventually brought out noise and air
pollution
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. Individuals are growing ill very easily, as there are impurities in drinking water, air, food, etc.
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, a research study shows that there has been a major increase in
pollution
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levels due to the population growth caused by tourists, and
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, there are health problems faced by the people.
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, not only
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the environment
is being polluted, but
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the society
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faces
health issues. In conclusion, the tourism industry enhanced growth of the economy by providing beneficial income to different sectors of the country.
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, it
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created problems to the nature and individuals through
pollution
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and illnesses.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • boost
  • vital
  • communities
  • cultural exchange
  • diverse backgrounds
  • over-tourism
  • strain
  • infrastructure
  • overcrowding
  • environmental degradation
  • diminished
  • residents
  • commercialization
  • exploited
  • natural landscapes
  • cultural sites
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