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Plan A below shows a health centre in 2005. Plan B shows the same place in the present day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given maps illustrate the modifications have taken place in a health centre between the time period of 2005 and
present
Suggestion
the present
. It is clear that the enlargement of the building and a completely new entrance have been the main changes and various other alterations have accompanied them. Looking at the information in more detail, we can observe that
minor operations room
Suggestion
the minor operations room
 have been constructed using the garden space. In 2005 people used to enter the health centre through doors which lead into the place where
seats
Suggestion
the seats
 and reception desk were located, whereas now it is in the south west of the building with reception desk on the left and children’s play area on the right. CR1 and CR2 have replaced the previous entrance and the area, in which they were located
in
Suggestion
at
 2005, have been converted into CR3 and CR4. More car parking spaces have been erected by changing the place of the fences.
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