Biological diversity in the ecological system needs human preservation to prevent the extinction of
species
. It is argued that whether protection of wild
animals
should be all-rounded or limited to several wild
animals
. To me,
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should conserve
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nature without over-intervention.
It is said that Scientists and Zoologists should protect all varieties of natural
animals
. Every
species
areCorrect subject-verb agreement
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valuable to maintain the uncountable number of animal types.
However
, it will lead to
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the
animals
may lose their skills to hunt and
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build a shelter.
For instance
, if mankind put tigers under protection, tigers may lose their innate ability to hunt prey and only wait for food provided by the zoo keepers. Meanwhile, when
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are protected, they may lose the awareness of danger,
they may be killed easily. Protecting all kinds of
animals
is another kind of
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because the natural environment becomes artificial.
Nevertheless
, some activists of animal rights emphasize only conserving
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endangered
species
to prevent their extinction. The natural habitats of wild
animals
should not be disturbed. Only when the number of certain
species
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dramatically that going to be extinct,
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must intervene to try to keep them alive.
For example
, pandas were categorized as endangered
species
in China, and
therefore
the Chinese government devoted a
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to try to
more baby pandas.
I agree that it is not necessary for
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to protect all wild
species
.
HumanFix the agreement mistake
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should only monitor and record different types of natural
animals
to have a better understanding of diversity in
species
. Unless the
species
encounteredWrong verb form
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the danger of extinction,
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should not intervene
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ecology.
In conclusion, human activities
such
as cutting trees from the forest and emitting greenhouse gases that always
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. All people should bear the responsibility to maintain a lifestyle of less carbon footprint to provide a better living area for
animals
.