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In many countries,plastic shopping bags are main source of rubbish.Do you agree or diagree?

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There is little room for doubt that the “throw-away” lifestyle is prevailing in most countries.Some people opt to maintain that elastic bags should be banned.
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 view seems absurd, as far as I am concerned. On the one hand, it is understandable why some people believe that the government should control the amount of plastics produced.
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 of all,
this
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 type of garbage is not recyclable, expensive to recycle even though they are cheaper to manufacture.Littering outline the potential causes of widespread pollution.Turtles suffocating in the oceans,
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, is one of the most observed common cases.
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, the need for moulded in the society can be solved provided that some reasonable step is taken.
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, eco-friendly bags are more proper to every society.Because it is less serious to surround and uncomplicated, as well as lower-priced to reuse and reprocess.
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, I would argue that producing elastic materials should not be restricted for many reasons.
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, the use of
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 bags can be much effortless, easy and more comfortable for people as resilient and elastic goods are lighter compared to the others.
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 to
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, if the government discourages moulded bags, companies which working toward producing
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 kind of bags will go bankrupt.
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, not only will workers not be able to feed their families, but
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 there will be an increase in the unemployment rate in the society. The example is that famous company in the USA facing
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 situation
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 of a ban using these bags. In conclusion,
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 there are good reasons why some people opine that manufacturing elastic bags should be prohibited, I believe these businesses are important not only for people, founders of the companies, but
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 for the government.
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