Nowadays parents put too much pressure on their children to succeed. What is the reason for doing this? Is this a negative or positive development?

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Many
youngters
a young person of either sex
youngsters
and teenagers, often complain about lack of leisure time.
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could be due to two main reasons, one parental
pressure
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competiton
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the competition
competition
computation
competitor
involved in seeking
high
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higher
education. Parents these days subject their kids to a lot of
pressure
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they rarely allow them any free time for recreation or other activities.
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is mainly because they want their children to do well at school.They rarely, realize the importance of socializing and healthy activities in a child's life.Many young individuals have to attend private tuitions
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to the daily school and
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spend weekends
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coaching class. In India it is thought to be a matter of great shame if a child is not able to attain high grades in their secondary or high school exams.Parents and children have to face humiliation and ridicule in the society because of
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is not the only reason behind parental
pressure
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.Seat
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is limited
for vocational courses in many universities
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number of applicants out number the number of places available.The cut off grades are very high and it is a cut throat competition when college and university education comes
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into
focus.
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kind of
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, from the elders and
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the society seems to be driving the youth into
depression many
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depression, many
students are
commiting
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committing
commuting
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suicides and ending their lives due to failure. Even though
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many educational groups are relentlessly
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persuasion of voters in a political campaign
canvassing
confusing
to educate the parents about the negative effect
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the impact is very slow. There Priminister of India Mr.
Narander
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Modi came on air and
reasured
having confidence restored; freed from anxiety
reassured
both the students and parents that failure in education should not be considered as doom, it is the stepping
stone
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for success. In conclusion,"All work and no play makes Jake a dull boy"
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adage should be explained to all the parents and they should be encouraged towards building the over all personalitiy of thier offspring, and it is most important that the schools reach out and counsell the parents and creat awareness among them about the disasterous effect their constant
pressure
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might have.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Excessive pressure
  • Academic achievements
  • Professional success
  • Secure future
  • Social comparison
  • Competitive environment
  • Psychological impact
  • Stress and anxiety
  • Resilience
  • Work ethic
  • Emotional well-being
  • Supportive parenting
  • Achievements
  • Life skills
  • Balance
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