Nowadays, people are spending increasingly large amounts of money on their marriage parties. Many people feel large and expensive weddings cause problems for the bride and groom. Do you agree?

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In recent times community is expense more on function and other activity.It is often argued that in todays scenario societies is devoted to a plenty of money to their reception. The majority of members of societies consider that high

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marriage created a concern for a couple. I plainly disagree with

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with, individual is contributing a vast number of

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to their money on several functions including serving food, transportation and clothing. There is a plethora of reason for that.

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and foremost, as today people have a lot of relative and friends.

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have expensed a large amount of money on the foods and related activities.

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to these, other expense

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like renting a car or arranging a transportation for people is

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a make higher volume in terms of monetary.

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, According to a survey of IIM Ahemdabad, More than half of spending of total

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is about serving a cuisine to the people.

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, it is understandable that we cannot consider a newly wedded couple are not the major reason.

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, there are other

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related to parties as well.

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as clothes and accessories which

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contributed more than 20%.

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, high brand suits and jewellery are one of the major concerns of families. Which has a significant contribution to the total

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. To conclude, as there are several

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are there apart from parties.

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statement does not seem rational to me.

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