A friend of yours is thinking of going to a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter, Explain why you think your friend would enjoy camping holiday describe some possible disadvantages say whether you would like to go on camping with your friend this summer
Dear Raghav,
I hope you are doing well. I heard that you are planning to go to Alberta, Banff for camping
this
summer. I would love to go with you. I was also
thinking of going on vacation this
time. I am so excited that, I already have the itinerary in my mind for the trip. we will go in September, as it's the last
month
of the summer. Also
, it would be budget-friendly for us. If you want to go in the month
of the summer, everything will be so expensive, because that's the peak month
of the year.
Moreover
, we have to make bookings in advance for rentals -cars, camping grounds, camps. One thing, that you need to keep in mind is, that it's not easy for first-time campers. So, you need to prepare your mind for all the situations that we
can possibly encounter.
I am waiting to hear back from you about how many weeks you are planning, and which Correct pronoun usage
you
month
you prefer to go.
Your friend,
BhavikaSubmitted by kiranbirkaur003 on
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task achievement
In one part of the letter, you mentioned that going in September would be budget-friendly. It might be helpful to briefly explain why it is so, such as the reduction in tourist numbers or changes in weather.
coherence cohesion
Since you bring up multiple points regarding cost and preparation, consider placing them in separate paragraphs to enhance clarity. For example, one paragraph for the budget considerations and another for the preparations and potential difficulties.
task achievement
You addressed all parts of the task very well, assuring your friend that he would enjoy the trip, discussing the advantages and disadvantages, and expressing your desire to join him.
task achievement
Your writing tone is very friendly and encouraging, which is perfectly suitable for the context of writing to a friend.
coherence cohesion
The letter begins with a clear and warm greeting, and ends with a suitable closing, maintaining a friendly and engaging tone throughout.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,