Not everything that is learned is contained in books

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Over the past centuries, it has been proved that gaining

knowledge

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is one of the most important factors in achieving goals and ambitions. Many people believe that all of our learnings

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can find

can be found

in books while

other

plural of other; the people or things not already mentioned

others

think that books are not containing the real

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experience

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. From my point of view,

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, none of them, books or

experience

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, is highly useful than the other one, what we learn from

experience

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plays a main role in our self-development.

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preceding all others in time or space or degree

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of all, it has been said that “

experience

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is the best teacher” from

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we can understand how important

experience

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can be in a person’s

life

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. In fact,

experience

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is a

practical

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practicing

teacher while books are theoretical. There are many real world situations in which we need other people’s realistic

experience

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rather than

idealistic content

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the idealistic content

of books. Another point to consider is that many experienced people do not have the opportunity to write books about their

life

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, so the only way to benefit from their

experience

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is listening to their advice.

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, in practice, a well-educated person has less performance than a person with long

experience

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in the same career, because what individuals gain with spending time in a work place is more valuable than spending time at universities without any visual

experience

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, during

life

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we read a lot of

text-books

according to or characteristic of a casebook or textbook; typical

textbooks

and some books for pleasure too, but remembering their contents is not as easy it seems whereas,

experience

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are

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more memorable because of their tangibility.

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, reading books and references open our eyes to a new horizon. Reading books not only informs us about

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the latest science

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technology but

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technology, but

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increases our

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related to ancient history.

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, most of the

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we learn from books are

results

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the results

of an author researches, which are reliable and classified.

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, when we set a goal, books are tremendous resources which gives us information to reach our goals as quickly as possible in proven ways. In fact, the more

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we have, the clear goal we can see. Fortunately, the modern technology makes access to different types of books and references

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as E-book and audio books in various subjects possible more than ever.

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, we can learn a lot from books without any limitation, with reading them in our spare times. In conclusion,

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people learn plenty of

knowledge

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from books and use them effectively during their

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life time

the period during which something is functional (as between birth and death)

lifetime

, the gaining

knowledge

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from

experience

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is more constant and tangible. So, for me the

knowledge

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provides with

experience

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is more helpful

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