Some people prefer to live in hot climates whereas others love the lifestyle in countries with cold climates Discuss both views and explain which climate you prefer

It is fact that,
climate
affects various areas of the people's life in terms of
work
, mood, health and tourism. Nowadays, due to globalization and influence of western
culture mass
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culture, mass
has attracted towards the developed countries irrespective of the weather condition. Some people like to live in the warmth
climate
like
Autralia
a nation occupying the whole of the Australian continent; Aboriginal tribes are thought to have migrated from southeastern Asia 20,000 years ago; first Europeans were British convicts sent there as a penal colony
Australia
;
whilest
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whilst
others have a preference to live in child
climate
counties
a politically organized body of people under a single government
countries
like Canada, The Unites
states
the federal department in the United States that sets and maintains foreign policies
States
. Both hot as
welI
a high boot made of rubber
welly
wily
as cold
climate
have their own merits and demerits. I prefer to live in a moderate
climate
for better health and development. The reasons for my inclination are articulated in the ensuing paragraphs. On one hand, one school of thought thinks that hot
climate
is better for the life of the human as the days in
this
climate
are longer and have a great sunlight which provides sufficient vitamin D.
Moreover
, People can not only enjoy travelling, the diversity in the wildlife but
also
different types of outfits.
However
, Hot
climate
can
adversly
in an adverse manner
adversely
affect the mood,
work
and immunity of people. To cite an example, In hot
climate
due to
accessive
beyond normal limits
excessive
sunlight and sweating, some people face
dehydration issue
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the dehydration issue
dehydration issues
and it leads to lack of energy along with
tireness
exhaust or get tired through overuse or great strain or stress
tires
tiredness
in
work
which badly impacts the
work
.
On the other hand
, one group of the people opine that, the cold
climate
is good for the humans as it has many advantages
such
as fresh mood, energy to do
work
effectively, boosts the immunity, cools your mind and refreshing sleep. On
contrataty
, it has its own disadvantages.
Firstly
,
the heavy
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heavier
clothing to
rotect
shield from danger, injury, destruction, or damage
protect
body
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the body
from
cold
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cold climates
climate
.
Secondly
, lack of enjoyment with nature and
;
Accept space
;
Lastly
, required heating system everywhere like in the office, home, car, malls etc. To recapitulate, both the
climate
wheather
introduces two alternatives
whether
it is hot or cols have its own benefits and drawbacks.
Although
In what type of
environment people
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environment, people
want to live is
a
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an
individual choice, I prefer to live in places which have moderate environment, which is helpful for
wholesome growth
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the wholesome growth
of people and to enjoy the diversity of life.
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