Some people prefer to live in hot climates whereas others love the lifestyle in countries with cold climates Discuss both views and explain which climate you prefer
It is fact that,
climate
affects various areas of the people's life in terms of Use synonyms
work
, mood, health and tourism. Nowadays, due to globalization and influence of western Use synonyms
culture mass
has attracted towards the developed countries irrespective of the weather condition. Some people like to live in the warmth Accept comma addition
culture, mass
climate
like Use synonyms
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; a nation occupying the whole of the Australian continent; Aboriginal tribes are thought to have migrated from southeastern Asia 20,000 years ago; first Europeans were British convicts sent there as a penal colony
Australia
whilest
others have a preference to live in child Suggestion
whilst
climate
Use synonyms
counties
like Canada, The Unites a politically organized body of people under a single government
countries
states
. Both hot as the federal department in the United States that sets and maintains foreign policies
States
welI
as cold a high boot made of rubber
welly
wily
climate
have their own merits and demerits. I prefer to live in a moderate Use synonyms
climate
for better health and development. The reasons for my inclination are articulated in the ensuing paragraphs.
On one hand, one school of thought thinks that hot Use synonyms
climate
is better for the life of the human as the days in Use synonyms
this
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climate
are longer and have a great sunlight which provides sufficient vitamin D. Use synonyms
Moreover
, People can not only enjoy travelling, the diversity in the wildlife but Linking Words
also
different types of outfits. Linking Words
However
, Hot Linking Words
climate
can Use synonyms
adversly
affect the mood, in an adverse manner
adversely
work
and immunity of people. To cite an example, In hot Use synonyms
climate
due to Use synonyms
accessive
sunlight and sweating, some people face beyond normal limits
excessive
dehydration issue
and it leads to lack of energy along with Suggestion
the dehydration issue
dehydration issues
tireness
in exhaust or get tired through overuse or great strain or stress
tires
tiredness
work
which badly impacts the Use synonyms
work
.
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On the other hand
, one group of the people opine that, the cold Linking Words
climate
is good for the humans as it has many advantages Use synonyms
such
as fresh mood, energy to do Linking Words
work
effectively, boosts the immunity, cools your mind and refreshing sleep. On Use synonyms
contrataty
, it has its own disadvantages. Suggestion
Firstly
, Linking Words
the heavy
clothing to Suggestion
heavier
rotect
shield from danger, injury, destruction, or damage
protect
body
from Suggestion
the body
cold
Suggestion
cold climates
climate
. Use synonyms
Secondly
, lack of enjoyment with nature andLinking Words
;
Accept space
;
Lastly
, required heating system everywhere like in the office, home, car, malls etc.
To recapitulate, both the Linking Words
climate
Use synonyms
wheather
it is hot or cols have its own benefits and drawbacks. introduces two alternatives
whether
Although
In what type of Linking Words
environment people
want to live is Accept comma addition
environment, people
a
individual choice, I prefer to live in places which have moderate environment, which is helpful for Suggestion
an
wholesome growth
of people and to enjoy the diversity of life.Suggestion
the wholesome growth
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