Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree? What are the other measures do you think might be effective?

It is said that the governments should impose a higher tax on petrol and gas in order to protect the

enviroment

the totality of surrounding conditions

environment

as well as dwindle the traffic jam.

Although

the suggestion seems useful, I believe that other measures reap the

further

benefits.

First

and foremost, when the cost of petrol is higher than usual, people may less likely to use private motorbike or car because they do not want to fritter away money on

uneccessary

not necessary

unnecessary

things. What is more, as the number of drivers decrease over the time, the roads would have less people and traffic jam can be solved effectively. Not only dealing with the traffic jam, the statement

also gain

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also gains

has also gained

the benefit about the

enviroment

the totality of surrounding conditions

environment

because the demise of exhaust fumes from vehicles can make the

atmostphere

a particular environment or surrounding influence

atmosphere

become fresher. On the flip side, I shall argue that there is more than just one way and tax on petrol makes the citizen difficult in driving because of the financial background.

More specific

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More specifically

, many people living far from the public transports

such

as bus or subway,

therefore

these people have to afford their own vehicle in order to move around. Having paid high taxes may ruin their working as well.

Instead

, there are the number of ways help countering the issue

such

as encouraging people to use public transports and the governments should invest money on buses or subways to become modern, convenient and cheap fees if the cost of fuels are paid extremely. The governments should invent

new vehicle

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a new vehicle

that not release too much fossil

fuels

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fuel

.

For example

, electrical motorbikes are popular in Vietnam. To sum up, as the above-cited

arguements

a fact or assertion offered as evidence that something is true

arguments

, it can be seen that there are several advantages from

highly

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high

fuel taxes.

However

, in order to guarantee that it is fair to everybody, some alternative methods can be taken.