Films and computer games which contain violence are very popular. Some people believe they have a negative effect on society and so should be banned. Other people, however, say they are just harmless and help people to relax. Discuss both these points of view and give your own opinion.
There is no denying the fact that nowadays films and games are the source of entertainment people are preferring to spend huge hours in front of it. Many people believe that it is having a negative impact and other argue that it helps people to get relax.So, in the upcoming paragraphs.Am going to discuss both of the views.
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, teenagers cannot learn about the different skills like teamwork and planning. Linking Words
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To conclude, people may have different opinions about the violence on television and in video games. In my opinion, every technology gives a positive impact if we run it in an efficient way.Accept comma addition
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