Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment but population and education as well. What problems will your country face in the next ten years? How can these problems be overcome?

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SOME NATIONS ARE CONCERNED ABOUT THE ENVIRONMENT ISSUES, THERE ARE

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OTHER PROBLEMS ABOUT EDUCATION AND POPULATION. WHICH WILL BE GAINNING MORE ATTENTION IN THE FUTURE. IN MY COUNTRY, BRAZIL THE LEADERS WILL HAVE FAR MORE ISSUES TO TACKLE IN THE

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DECADE. AS A DEVELOPING COUNTRY, BRAZIL HAS BEEN ENCOUNTERING ONE DIFFICULTY AFTER ANOTHER, WHICH COULD BE SOLVED EASIER IF THE PRESIDENT HAS GIVEN MORE ATTENTION TO SOLVE IT TRULLY.

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, THE LACK OF INFRASTRUCTURE IN THE CENTER CITIES. DUE TO THE DISORGANIZED GROWTH TO TRAVEL IN BRAZIL HAS BECOME WAY TOO HARD BECAUSE CARS, BUSES AND EVEN TRAINS HAVE TO REDUCE THEIR SPEED SO THAT PEOPLE SPEND UNCOUNTABLE HOURS ONLY TO BE ABLE TO WORK AND GO BACK TO THEIR HOUSES.

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, THE HIGH RATE OF POVERTY HAS INCREASED SHARPLY AFTER THE FINANCIAL CRISE THAT SOMEWHAT IS RESPONSIBLE FOR HAVING MORE AND MORE HOMELESS IN THE STREETS AROUND THE COUNTRY EVEN IN RICH LOCATIONS

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AS SAO PAULO ONE OF THE BIGGEST CITIES IN THE WORLD.

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, THE LEADERS ARE TOTALLY ABLE TO TACKEL TO ALL THESE PROBLEMS ABOVE. ONE POSSIBLE SOLUTION WOULD BE TO REBUILD THE CITY CENTER TO OFFER A BETTER INFRASTRUCTURE, CREATING LARGE STREETS TO PROVIDE A FASTER LOCOMOTION WHETHER BY CAR OR PUBLIC TRANSPORT.

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, CROWDED PLACES MIGHT BE RARE TO SEE.

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, ANOTHER WAY TO RESOLVE IT COULD BE TO ACCEPT FINANCIAL HELP FROM DEVELOPED COUNTRIES AND INVEST IN EDUCATION TO PREPARE MAINLY POOR COMMUNITIES AND HOMELESS HAVE A PROFESSION.

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THESE PEOPLE COULD RECEIVE ENOUGH MONEY FOR PAYING THEIR BILLS AND RAISE THEIR CHILDREN IN THE FUTURE. TO CONCLUDE, SOME ISSUES WILL BE PREDICTABLE IF THE POLITICIANS ARE ENGAGED TO REALLY SOLVE THEM. BRAZILIAN LEADERS MUST INVENT SOME NEW WAYS TO IMPROVE INFRASTRUCTURE AND POVERTY UNTIL 2030. TO RECONSTRUCT ESSENTIAL PLACES AND INVEST MORE IN EDUCATION SHOULD BE UTTERLY POSSBILE.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 9.0

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Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Sustainability
Ecosystem
Renewable resources
Urbanization
Demographics
Healthcare system
Pension crisis
Curriculum development
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E-learning platforms
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Biodiversity conservation
Green technology
Population density
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Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment but population and education as well. What problems will your country face in the next ten years? How can these problems be overcome?

Fully explain your ideas

Some people believe it is essential to include physical education classes in the curriculum for all school-age children. Others think that children's time is better spent on more academics subjects. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some cities create housing areas by providing taller buildings other create housing by building houses on a wider area of land what solution is better?

Environmental damage is a problem in most countries. What is the cause of this damage? What should be done about this problem?

Some people think that the increasing use of computers and mible phones for communication has a negative effect on young people's reading and writing skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many people believe that it is easier to have a healthy lifestyle in the countryside. Others believe that there are health benefits of living in cities Discuss bth views and give your own opinions