the use of mobile phone is as antisocial as smoking. Smoking is banned in certain places and so mobile phone should also be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

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Recently, many people think that
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are as antisocial as smoking, so that should not be allowed to use in certain places. I
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essay will discuss how mobile phones are important to us. One of the most important reasons why mobile phones are not antisocial, is no longer feeling along. It is unbelievable that people would not feel
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without any others being included or involved
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and bored though accessing the internet with
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anywhere in the world, even staying the top of Qomolangma.
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, people could have a video
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with their friends and
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with all kinds of fun games.
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, for all people
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is an assistant. Almost everyone benefit from services
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,
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help user keeping information, photos and videos, which is huge different and convenient approach to make good memories preserved. Life saving is another significant function of mobile phones. Many consider that
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are as harmful as smoking.
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,
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can save people’s life, when people go hiking, go skiing and meeting terrible weather, is a basic safety precaution. Admittedly, mobile devices might disturb people's work or study in some cases.
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, the sound from a mobile phone can interrupt a lecture, a movie and
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, It’s so difficult to remain working and studying when your phone is tempting you to pick it up.
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, in order to avoid those negative
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any state or process known through the senses rather than by intuition or reasoning
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, limited using
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for some targets in certain situations is necessary. To summarize, it is clear that
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are too important for people to can’t be prohibited, while in some cases restricted some
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
of using mobile devices is positive and helpful.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • antisocial
  • social interactions
  • negative impacts
  • banning
  • regulated
  • completely banned
  • education
  • awareness campaigns
  • responsible
  • mobile phone use
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