You ordered a book online for exam preparation. It has been some time since you ordered it and still has not received your book. Write a letter to the e-commerce company about this. • Describe your purchase order of the book • Explain the importance of the book • Say what you want the company to do for you

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to the customer service manager regarding the

book

that I purchased from your website

last

month. I am a loyal customer of your company and have been buying many goods from your e-commerce website,

however

this

time I am highly disappointed with your services for the Cambridge IELTS

book

with order number #24566839 that was purchased on 22nd June 2020. There is a delay in the order from your side and I have not yet received it. Let me explain to you my situation. The

book

is important to me because it is the official guide for IELTS preparation, which is scheduled for 8th August 2020. I need enough practice for it since the questions are closest to what is asked in the exam and failing to do so can result in a poorer band score. As a part of compensation, I would appreciate it if you could speed post the

book

from another courier that can deliver it within 2 days as the

book

non- returnable

Correct your spelling

non-returnable

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as well as non-refundable.

Moreover

, please share the tracking details with me on my email ID. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Emily Jackson

Submitted by Ideator_25 RockZz on Thu Jul 23 2020

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7 paragraphs

199 words

8.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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