After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter to express your gratitude. In your letter: Introduce yourself and let him/her know why you are writing Express your appreciation And offer him/ her to visit your home with this family.

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Patel, I am Yash, I hope you remembered me, I am the one that you took care

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that horrible accident.

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letter for your unprecedented effort to save my life. I must thank you from the bottom of my heart and I will always owe you my whole life after that incident. It is just your greatness that you stop by and took me to a nearby hospital

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because the person who smashed my car from behind and ran away. Honestly, I lost

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hope at one point after no one was stopping by even after my lots of screaming and seeking

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help. But your sympathy and sentiments always remain a true blessing for me.

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, I must deserve a chance to truly appreciate your kindness by inviting you

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my home, especially my younger son wants to meet a real angel like you and my whole family wants to thank you personally.

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sincerely, Yash Chauhan

YASH CHAUHANThu Jul 23 2020

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Task Achievement: 8.0

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6 paragraphs

165 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

gratitude
appreciation
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kindness
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heartfelt
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sacrifices
safety
comfort
invitation
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personal connection
reflecting
impact
reinforcing
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