Some people are happy to spend the whole of their life living in the same area. However, others prefer to live in many different areas over their life time. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

People hold different views about living, some people prefer to spend their entire life
at
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in
one
place
, while others prefer to migrate to different places. In my opinion, I partially agree as I believe that an individual should explore different places, but eventually needs to settle down to start a family. On the one hand, some people may have
emotional attachement
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an emotional attachment
emotional attachment
emotional attachments
towards their birth
place
or the
place
where they
are living
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have been living
have lived
since
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for
many years.
This
is mainly because an individual may feel content and relaxed.
For instance
, an individual living in one
place
, since birth, may have its childhood friends living in the same vicinity, its school and other fond memories which makes the
place
more memorable to live in;
therefore
, it will be difficult to leave the
place
.
On the other hand
, some people are curious about different places;
hence
, they migrate frequently. The main reason is that each
place
has its own uniqueness and people after knowing about
such
places may feel to explore it by living there.
For example
, recently an article was published in a Travel magazine about a teenager who wanted to explore different places, in India, and has lived in five different cities.
However
, it is not viable for a family person to switch areas, as it may negatively impact their children. It would not only harm their studies but
also
it will consume time to adjust to a new
place
. In conclusion, I believe that people should explore different places,
nevertheless
, it would be difficult to migrate with a family.
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