Some people are happy to spend the whole of their life living in the same area. However, others prefer to live in many different areas over their life time. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

People hold different views about living, some people prefer to spend their entire life

Suggestion

one

place

, while others prefer to migrate to different places. In my opinion, I partially agree as I believe that an individual should explore different places, but eventually needs to settle down to start a family. On the one hand, some people may have

emotional attachement

Suggestion

an emotional attachment

emotional attachment

emotional attachments

towards their birth

place

or the

place

where they

are living

Suggestion

have been living

have lived

since

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for

many years.

This

is mainly because an individual may feel content and relaxed.

For instance

, an individual living in one

place

, since birth, may have its childhood friends living in the same vicinity, its school and other fond memories which makes the

place

more memorable to live in;

therefore

, it will be difficult to leave the

place

On the other hand

, some people are curious about different places;

hence

, they migrate frequently. The main reason is that each

place

has its own uniqueness and people after knowing about

such

places may feel to explore it by living there.

For example

, recently an article was published in a Travel magazine about a teenager who wanted to explore different places, in India, and has lived in five different cities.

However

, it is not viable for a family person to switch areas, as it may negatively impact their children. It would not only harm their studies but

also

it will consume time to adjust to a new

place

. In conclusion, I believe that people should explore different places,

nevertheless

, it would be difficult to migrate with a family.

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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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10Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

258 words

6.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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