In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.
In several nations’ adolescents are supported to have some jobs or travel for one
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demonstrate that young people can have a new perspective of the horizon as an advantage, followed by an analysis of the diminishing of Linking Words
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motivation on the younger after one Suggestion
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year
travel or work as a negative impact.
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, the adolescent who stop enrolling in the Linking Words
university
may find out the novelty perspectives for the resting Use synonyms
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. In fact, both travelling and working can provide a person some various experiences, Use synonyms
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as learn to co-operate with others while working or learn some different cultures at different places while travelling. Linking Words
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, it can lead one to have a mature minded and some useful experiences that help for confronting the upcoming world by themselves. A recent Linking Words
study
found that student who did not immediately starts their Use synonyms
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studies have gained lots of interesting views and they seem to be much more mature than others because of the experiences they had.
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a negative impact on Linking Words
this
situation. The younger might have less motivation to start studying after a Linking Words
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, the adolescent will be uncomfortable to have restrictions in Linking Words
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again while there was no limitation when they travelled. A recent research found that students who did not intake to Use synonyms
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In conclusion, there are two kinds of aspects of young people are encouraged to work or travel after they graduated from high Use synonyms
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and before entering the Use synonyms
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. Having a different or wiser perspective can improve one’s thoughts, but they must be aware of getting less motivation to have higher education which would better help them in their specific industry in the future.Use synonyms
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...