Many people think that mobile phones should be banned in public places such as libraries, shops, and public transport. Do you agree or disagree

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It is widely acknowledged that mobile phones are ubiquitous these days. Many humans believe that
cellphones
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cell phones
should be prohibited in public spots. I completely agree with
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statement and a
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of arguments
surround
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surrounds
my opinion, which I will elaborate in the forthcoming paragraphs.
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with, A host
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of individuals claim that impose a ban on
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phones in public places
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as libraries, shops and public transport. Many masses are going to library for peaceful environment, because they can study there without distraction.
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, libraries are always maintaining silence.
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, few irresponsible folks are using
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phones in that place, because they feel like they are on the road or somewhere and
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they are not doing that deliberately.
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, a couple of months back, I visited the city library in Chennai, there one person is frequently getting calls to his
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, he was attending the calls, where people listening him feel like disturbance.
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, in public transport
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as Buses, Trains. People are using those and travelling to their destinations for work. In that busy time, some nasty people are taking their photos and videos and violating their privacy. Particularly for ladies.
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, in
shops
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shop
employees are talking to others via
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phone and they are providing groceries to consumers properly what they asked.
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, customers feel uncomfortable about their service.
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, applying a ban on
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phone in community places is not a better idea, why because there is no alternative to
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phones in community places.
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, in some places telephone booths are available to public, but in many places they are on verge of extinction.
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, mobile phones save lives in case of emergency services can easily locate you where someone contacted you.
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, one of my colleague was travelling to Mumbai for an interview by flight, in that time his grandfather was admitted to hospital due to heart stroke, his father trying to contact his
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but he cannot, as he is in flight. To conclude, folks try to know where to use
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cell phone
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cell phones
a cell phone
and where not. Try to be aware about it and
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don't disturb others attention.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Distraction
  • Etiquette
  • Tranquility
  • Prohibit
  • Intrusive
  • Courtesy
  • Essential communication
  • Public decorum
  • Designated areas
  • Safety concerns
  • Noise pollution
  • Digital etiquette
  • Enforcement measures
  • Civic responsibility
  • Silent mode
  • Connectivity
  • Invasiveness
  • Social norms
  • Policy implementation
  • Moderation
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