In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decides to do this?

In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. There are several advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do

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if a person who just got out of his or her school and allowed to travel or work he or she can easily get addicted to some bad habits since everything they will see hear or fell will be entirely new to them to explore and

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might sometime leads them into an problem we have seen many kids ruining their life’s because of their addiction of drugs or alcohol or gambling and once trapped there is no way out

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if we look at it in a positive way it’s the best decision they make since what so ever they will do

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in time whether its travelling or working it will help them build their selves for future these experiences will flourish their future for good if taken seriously. If they are travelling they get to know the world, different cultures and traditions if they opt to work they will be helping their families and be independent and

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will become a habit for them to do everything on their own these people won't rely on anyone for anything at all. To conclude all I can say is that merits and demeri

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