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Everyone should adopt a vegetarian diet because eating meat can cause serious health problems. Do you agree or disagree?

#diet #meat #health
There are many vegetarians in the world who do not eat animals because of religious, moral or health issues.
Although
 there are some important vitamins in
meat
, vegetarian lifestyle is healthier and it can protect people from different health problems.
Firstly
,
meat
 contains protein, calcium and
vitamins which
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vitamins, which
is
Suggestion
are
 important for human immune system and defend people against flu and cold. Anti-vegetarians who are doing sport, they should eat some proportion of
meat
 for their muscles and beans. If people adopt
vegetarian diet
Suggestion
a vegetarian diet
vegetarian diets
 in their whole life, there can be some deficiencies in their body.
On the contrary
,
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,
I agree with that eating
meat
 can create many health problems. Sometimes doctors prohibit eating
meat
 to their patients who suffer from heart disease or diabetes. Because
meat
 increases cholesterol and it can lead clogged arteries. People who suffer from cancer disease, they are
also
 prohibited to eat
meat
.
Moreover
, vegetables and plants contain necessary
vitamins which
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vitamins, which
is
Suggestion
are
 important for human body.
Also
, vegetarian meals are cheaper than
meat
, so it will lead economic lifestyle if people get vegetarian foods. İn conclusion, while
meat
also
 important for everyone, if people expect healthy lifestyle, they should decrease the portion of
meat
 and get into vegetarian diet.
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