While some people believe that new houses should be built in the same style as the houses already in the area, others argue that local councils should allow people to build a house in their own style. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In every society a proportion
opiniates
towards the old-school architecture, when it comes to building shelter, whereas there is a portion which is more interested in adding their own touch to it. In
this
essay I'll discuss both the points.
However
, keeping in mind the present situations, I believe that a home is a personal space and
hence
should be personalised.
Firstly
, the aged era houses focuses majorly on the impact of socialisation and
conecting
connect, fasten, or put together two or more pieces
connecting
the outside world to the inside.
For instance
, the attached town houses in south
asian
a native or inhabitant of Asia
Asian
countries, usually share the roof.
This
allows the neighbours to gather and socialise and
have informal conversation
Suggestion
have an informal conversation
.
For example
, In India, a family might host an after work high tea on their roof top, including their informal guests. There is usually no formal invitations being sent or a formality of
habbits
an established custom
habits
practice.
Such
meetings, brings up the level of harmony and trust and helps their younger ones to
develope
make something new, such as a product or a mental or artistic creation
develop
sense
Suggestion
a sense
of togetherness.
On the other hand
, there are believers of modern
architonics
. These people, usually need their own time and enjoy the household time.
Likewise in
Accept comma addition
Likewise, in
western part
Suggestion
the western part
of the globe, people are family oriented and
thus
, the result reflects in their constructions.
For example
, individuals living in detached houses in Canada often don't have any information about their neighbours.
Additionally
, a house is a space where a person can think, eat, and behave in his/her own comfort zone. Like, discussing internal financial issues with the nuclear family.
Also
, a group of people living in an independent space can design and arrange according to their
requirments
required activity
requirements
requirement
and taste. To conclude, in
this
fast pace of the world, our shade is the only area to relax. In my
opinon
a personal belief or judgment that is not founded on proof or certainty
opinion
, the built and construction of it should be according to one's own needs, wants, and capability.
Although
, the former erected shelters served the purpose
then
reuired
necessary for relief or supply
required
retired
rehired
.
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