While some people believe that new houses should be built in the same style as the houses already in the area, others argue that local councils should allow people to build a house in their own style. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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In every society a proportion

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towards the old-school architecture, when it comes to building shelter, whereas there is a portion which is more interested in adding their own touch to it. In

this

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essay I'll discuss both the points.

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, keeping in mind the present situations, I believe that a home is a personal space and

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should be personalised.

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, the aged era houses focuses majorly on the impact of socialisation and

conecting

connect, fasten, or put together two or more pieces

connecting

the outside world to the inside.

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, the attached town houses in south

asian

a native or inhabitant of Asia

Asian

countries, usually share the roof.

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allows the neighbours to gather and socialise and

have informal conversation

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have an informal conversation

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, In India, a family might host an after work high tea on their roof top, including their informal guests. There is usually no formal invitations being sent or a formality of

habbits

an established custom

habits

practice.

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meetings, brings up the level of harmony and trust and helps their younger ones to

develope

make something new, such as a product or a mental or artistic creation

develop

sense

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a sense

of togetherness.

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, there are believers of modern

architonics

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. These people, usually need their own time and enjoy the household time.

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Likewise in

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Likewise, in

western part

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the western part

of the globe, people are family oriented and

thus

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, the result reflects in their constructions.

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, individuals living in detached houses in Canada often don't have any information about their neighbours.

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, a house is a space where a person can think, eat, and behave in his/her own comfort zone. Like, discussing internal financial issues with the nuclear family.

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, a group of people living in an independent space can design and arrange according to their

requirments

required activity

requirements

requirement

and taste. To conclude, in

this

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fast pace of the world, our shade is the only area to relax. In my

opinon

a personal belief or judgment that is not founded on proof or certainty

opinion

, the built and construction of it should be according to one's own needs, wants, and capability.

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, the former erected shelters served the purpose

then

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reuired

necessary for relief or supply

required

retired

rehired

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Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

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