The maps below show a bookstore in 2000 and now. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The maps below show a bookstore in 2000 and now. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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These pictures describe the interior

appearances

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appearance

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bookshop

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a bookshop

the bookshop

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in 2000

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while

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comparing it with now.

Overall

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, it has

been

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made great changes significantly, but some places still remain as same as they were twenty years ago.

Firstly

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, it has not

been

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seen almost any changes in the location and size of the travel and the new books section

as well as

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the service desk has just stayed on the left corner of the building.

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, another three small sections (art, hobbies,cookery) and the huge non-fiction part have been completely replaced

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the cafe and three tables for it.

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, a considerable amount of size has been reduced in the fiction section by 2000. Obviously, the new design of

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the bookstore

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bookstore

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bookstores

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provides more leisure time for customers with selecting, reading and enjoying

with

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different types of books.

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, the readers

have

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occupied the cafe for drinking coffee and relax by reading books.

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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

152 words

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