The maps below show a bookstore in 2000 and now. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
These pictures describe the interior
appearances
of Fix the agreement mistake
appearance
bookshop
in 2000Add an article
a bookshop
the bookshop
,
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while
comparing it with now. Overall
, it has been
made great changes significantly, but some places still remain as same as they were twenty years ago.
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Firstly
, it has not been
seen almost any changes in the location and size of the travel and the new books section Unnecessary verb
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as well as
the service desk has just stayed on the left corner of the building.
However
, another three small sections (art, hobbies,cookery) and the huge non-fiction part have been completely replaced to
the cafe and three tables for it. Change preposition
with
As a result
, a considerable amount of size has been reduced in the fiction section by 2000.
Obviously, the new design of Correct article usage
the bookstore
bookstore
provides more leisure time for customers with selecting, reading and enjoying Fix the agreement mistake
bookstores
with
different types of books. Change preposition
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Moreover
, the readers have
occupied the cafe for drinking coffee and relax by reading books.Unnecessary verb
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