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Nowadays, the football supporters behave violently. What is the cause? How can we solve it?

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It is true that violent behaviour between supporters are frequently
occured
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occurring
occurred
 in
football
 march. While there are several reasons which can be put forward to explain
this
 change, in
this
 essay, I will suggest some possible solution to
this
 issue. There are two obvious reasons why
football
 hooliganism
become
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becomes
 a phenomenon,
Firstly
, a win-at-all-cost attitude make a significant impact on people’s thought and
behaviors
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
.
Football
 is no longer a leisure
activities
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activity
 for people to relieve stress, it becomes an intense competition among the supporters.
Therefore
, taking
football
 too seriously can result in violent
behaviors
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
.
Secondly
, some big tournaments happened around the world can become an ideal place for hooliganism
since
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for
football
 team represents the whole country to take part in.
Furthermore
, misunderstanding throughout the march can lead to confusion and
angriness
 between people.
However
, there are a number of solutions to deal with
this
 problem.
Firstly
, the authority
of
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on
 the contest can hire a great deal of securities in order to maintain the peaceful atmosphere during the march. If there are any wrongdoings happen, these people can immediately take control of the situation.
Secondly
, families and schools should deliver the right messages
for
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to
 students about sport attitude in their upbringing, as playing sport is
act
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acting
 as a cause to hooliganism, but is a tool to create an ideal environment for people to strengthen their relationship and improve their health. In conclusion,
although
 violent behaviours is a problem in
football
marchs
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march's
marches
, there are a lot of viable
solution
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solutions
 to address
this
 issue.
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