Some people think that internet has brought people closer together while others think that people and communities are become more isolated. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

A section of the populace is of the view that, using the web has made people United while others are of the notion that, people and the environment are separated from each other. Both schools of thought are right,
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is wise to side with the latter. On one hand, some people are of the idea that, using the net brings unity. In recent times, people easily link up with families through
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the network
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has replaced the era of letter writing, which delayed in contacting people.People nowadays have virtual communication and feel closer to their relatives.
For instance
, during the recent worldwide lockdown, families video chat with each other.
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business partners do transactions on the web without travelling long distances. An example is recent online trading that has made products closer to the people.
On the other hand
, some people feel that, people and the environment are being separated through the use of the internet. Currently
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most people think it's unnecessary travelling to visit relatives due to virtual communication and so on. Sometimes
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busy work schedules make people prefer communicating than visiting relatives. Previously
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people made time to visit relatives until the upsurge in network use. An example is people who live far from home only communicate through virtual means.
Besides
, people spend more time sending emails and reading online. Most people prefer using the web than participating in community leisure activities.
For instance
, children these days would rather play video games than go biking with friends. In conclusion, l believe the net has really brought people closer in terms of communica
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The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

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