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Nowadays many people communicate using social media.Discuss both advantages and disadvantages of this trend.

#people #media #trend
As social networking
over
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 the virtual domain is expanding quite rapidly,
people
 have resorted to using
this
 medium to communicate with others for their personal and professional objectives. But, it would be wise enough to get accustomed to the benefits and shortcomings of
this
 mode of
communications
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. Social networking provides easy accessibility across the globe that facilitates forging friendships and relationships in any part of the world. In a way, social network sites have added wings to fantasies of
people
 dreaming of establishing contacts with like-minded
people
 anywhere, regardless of geographical and political limitations.
This
mode
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 has provided a unified platform to inhabitants that has helped create harmony and foster a feeling of brotherhood.
Besides
 helping in fulfilling personal aspirations, the social network has assisted greatly in satisfying professional ambitions too. Reaching out to other contemporary professionals and specialists, in similar or disparate fields, across the length and breadth of the globe – using sites like ‘Linked-in’ and ‘Twitter’ – has become a tad easier task. Now reaching out to the audience with an adapted to local area promotion, anywhere on the planet is not an issue for organizations can now do their homework based on the inputs from local contacts.
However
, one must be quite vigilant about the possible drawbacks of
this
 way of communicating, since social networking is on the internet that camouflages behind a veil of anonymity. One can never be sure about the authenticity of
people
 on the other side of the net.
This
 aspect makes
the
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things
little
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 precarious for
the
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innocent
people
are
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 susceptible to
frauds
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 and data theft,
that
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 may contain sensitive information about an individual too.
To conclude
, I feel,
even
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that even
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 though social network is surely a great way to communicate, extreme caution is recommended
while
 forming relationships.
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