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Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours.

#neighbours #noise #house
Dear John Hope
this
 finds you in the best of spirits and health. I am writing
this
 letter to apologize for the
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inconvenience
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in-convenience
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 caused by the noise coming out from our house for the past 2 weeks. As you might be aware that we are the new tenants of the house we have just started to get things in order for a comfortable living. The bedroom and the hall needed a renovation as the walls have developed a seepage issue. We have hired some
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waterproofing
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water proofing
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 experts who have been working for the past two weeks to sort out the dampness caused by the seepage. In order to minimize the disturbance, I have intimated the workers to adhere to
strict
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 working schedule which should start from 10:00 AM in the morning and finish by 4:00 PM in the evening. I have
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 intimated them to restrict their work to just two hours on the weekends i.e. from 10:00 AM till 12:00 PM. I hope the measures mentioned above would be beneficial in toning down the noise levels and provide some sort of relief to you. Have a great day. Kind Regards Vasu G
Submitted by Vasudevam Garimella on

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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