There are many ways of preventing crime that are much better than prison. Do you agree or disagree with this view?

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Every human being in
this
world, commits mistakes. All are punished differently, in some the wrong deeds will never erase from their memory and others it will give physical pain.In my opinion, am strongly discouraging the practice of sending
one
person to prison for the rest of life. I will elucidate here, why am up against
this
practice.
To begin
with, we are living in a society where crime is common, am not supporting any course of violent action against humans here. All countries in
this
universe have a better law system to enforce strict rules against the convict. Those are available to ensure a tainted soul, not to get better up.
For example
,
one
commits robbery doesn't mean they can push away from surrounding. Given them a moral lesson and try to correct their behaviour would be the
first
priority of any judicial system.
Moreover taking
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Moreover, taking
away
one
's full lifetime as
one
part of giving punishment will never change or impact anything. They will only become more cruel than before.
For Instance
, a boy is committed burglary and court sends him to juvenile custody. He is more prone to generate new ways of doing wrong in his loneliness. Providing everyone with a moral values and right attitude is the efficient way to end up crimes. To conclude, Sentencing
one
to jail is not the only way to eradicate miseries and bring serenity. Inculcate good values and
also
the government should find alternate ways of punishment by giving the wrongdoers more social responsibility related work
.
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