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Education is not a luxury, but a basic human right and as such should be free for everyone irrespective of personal wealth. Do you agree or disagree?

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There has been always arguments around the
education
. Some people believe that it is one of the basic human rights, so whether the person is rich or poor, they should be treated equally with the amount of knowledge at no cost. Personally, I partially agree with
this
 opinion.
First
 of all, it is undoubtedly that knowledge is priceless.
Secondly
, free
education
 means everyone will be able to reach the same quality and the amount of knowledge.
This
 has clear advantages.
For example
, a child with various abilities and a smart brain can only
gain poor
Accept comma addition
gain, poor
 acquaintance, due to his or her family's financial conditions. If schooling is free, the child can learn more, and can be able to reach huge achievements and become even more successful than others.
Consequently
,
this
 can be the reason help the nation gain more talents and benefits.
However
, we cannot deny that nothing is for free.
In addition
,
education
 is one of the biggest vocations in the world, and it takes a huge percentage of the employment industry. It is a stable source of earning for thousands or even millions of people to support their lives. Just one question, if the study goes free, who gonna pay for all the hard-working teachers, professors, etc., the ones who teach us? In conclusion, I agree that
education
 is a basic human right, but make it free is not an absolutely great idea.
However
, the government can consider to reduce the fee and make it with an acceptable price.
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  • fundamental right
  • accessible
  • social mobility
  • personal and professional development
  • overall development
  • equality
  • social disparities
  • access
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