Some people think it would be a good idea for schools to teach every young person how to be a good parent. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Describe the skills a person needs to be a good parent.

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Parents
plays
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play
an important role in the life of a child.It is said by some individuals that schools should
inculde
have as a part, be made up out of
include
some skills in which young persons should be taught to become efficient parents.It is a unique idea that some of the skills should be taught to pupils in their young age
becuse
for the reason that; on account of
because
during that time they are capable of
learing
the cognitive process of acquiring skill or knowledge
learning
leading
fastly
with rapid movements
quickly
.I totally agree with the statement and my viewpoints on
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issue will be elaborated in the aforementioned paragraphs.
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with, one of the essential skill which must be the part of school syllabus is effective communication skill which is really essential in order to become parent because it is observed in the moderen socities these days parents do not talk to their children and they pamper them by giving expensive gifts rather than talking to them and its result is that children indulge themselves in bad activities
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as, pronography, snatching , stealing and drug addiction.
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, a child can learn to communicate effectively by involving them in discussions
,
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,
debates by teachers and these skills will definitely make them confident.
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,
children should be
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children should also be
also
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guided about the behavioural management
bcause
for the reason that; on account of
because
it is the biggest issue of concern in
this
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modernized and
westenized
make western in character
westernized
socities
an extended social group having a distinctive cultural and economic organization
societies
. Now days both parents are working so they have less time and
this
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is the reason that children are not behaving appropriately and it is compulsory to manage
this
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kind of behaviour.Schools must
incude
have as a part, be made up out of
include
behaviour
mangement
the act of managing something
management
techniques by teaching psychology to students. To recapitulate, I would like to write that nothing is impossible in
this
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world
.
Accept space
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Children can learn better if they are taught
in
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at
their young age in order to make them happy parents.
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