The first car appeared on British roads in 1888. By the year 2000 there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on British roads. Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

In British, the
first
car
was seen in the year 1888. After 112 years, there were 29 million vehicles was increased. Due to
this
alternative
transport
was introduced and the
government
has introduced a
law
in
car
ownership and its usage.
This
essay will discuss agree and disagree with the
law
. International
law
should be introduced to control
car
ownership and use.
Therefore
, the rise in cars, a lot of roads was made
additionally
, increasing road cuts the trees. Cutting the tree is harmful to the environment as well as its harm to
Earth
Suggestion
the Earth
. There will be a problem to park the
car
in the country if the
law
was not introduced. To illustrate,
peoples
Suggestion
the peoples
want to invest money in a property like land, hotel, shop, and restaurants.
As a result
, improvement in the property, the
government
gets more tax so it will be used to develop the country.
However
, the
law
will give a bad effect on poor and middle humans. Because of
this
rule, only rich people will get the
benefit but
Accept comma addition
benefit, but
other local people want to use local
transport
. All local and middle people can't buy the
car
if they have money. Lifetime the people used local
transport
moreover
, local
transport
takes more time to travel from one place to another place. While private cars take less time to travel. There are so many places in the world where the facility of public
transport
is not available. Due to
this
, the reason people are to purchase private cars.
For example
, in
villages
Suggestion
the villages
, the local population did not know the meaning of public transportation they used as a bike, tractors, and scooters to travel to another place. The problem of the solution that the
government
should fix the public vehicle in towns so it is beneficial for all local people. To conclude, the
government
should introduce the
law
in the metropolitan cities
also
this
law
is harmful to the village, poor, and middle group people.
Submitted by Gautam Patel on

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