New houses are often designed to have open private spaces like a balcony or garden. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages in this approach?

Many people, while constructing the new houses, prefer to have

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individual, non

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as balcony and

garden

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that, this

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occurrence might cause dangers and has several cons, it allows people to improve health, which is very beneficial.

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case there are more pros. Open spaces

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many drawbacks, and sometimes it might be even dangerous. Balcony might make problems in some cases.

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open

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the possibility

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of being robbed. Because, nowadays, cities are full of thieves, who will not miss

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opportunity.

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the balcony

a balcony

is dangerous for families with very young children, because

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as they are still unconscious

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they may just fall from there. According to gardens,

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the problem

is that they always need care, and it is difficult to grow vegetations qualitatively.

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, they can be easily damaged by sunlight or insects, so they require every time control, and regular watering. So

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these are the main downsides.

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, there are many conveniences. The main profit, is that these places significantly contribute to health welfare. Because, working in the

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demands huge effort, which can be useful body exercise.

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, vegetables and fruits, made by yourself, are full of nutrients

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because they do not contain additives.

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, my grandparents

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who live in a countryside, own a

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, and they consume only groceries

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which are made in there.

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, now, they are strong and healthy as we are

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, private

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with

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an enormous green area

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make people breathe with fresh air

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while the balcony is the place, where people can provide time

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enjoying the view. These are the major advantages. To conclude, many new house projects include open areas

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has more pros that cons, as it is better to strengthen health than being reluctant to obtain responsibility.